Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert and the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such place
Travelling is good for life. Nowadays, many people are visiting places like the Sahara desert and the Antarctic. The climatic conditions of such places are very hard to handle. This essay will discuss about the benefits and drawbacks of visiting these places.
Firstly, people get bored when they visit the same place again and again. So travelling to places like the Mount Everest and Sentinel Island will give then a unique experience and also develop their knowledge. Tourists while visiting the Mount Everest are accompanied by professional climbers. They teach them how to climb and drop from the mountain and some survival skills. Moreover, the tourists could also learn about the climatic variations of that place. On the other hand, people travelling to Sentinel Island could meet the tribal people who are very rare to see. For instance, meeting them and exploring their culture would provide new experience. Hence, travelling helps us in developing our wisdom.
Secondly, there are certain drawbacks in visiting such places. First, lack of medical facilities. There are chances of getting injured and health issues due to the weather. For example, if we fall and break our leg while climbing, there are no hospitals to take care. Second, chances of getting killed. Though meeting the tribal might be exciting but there are no possibilities for staying alive. I heard in news long back that most of the tribal of Sentinel Island are cannibals. Therefore, visiting these places may put out lives in danger.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the advantages and disadvantages of travelling to difficult places. My opinion is that travelers should avoid visiting the places where human population is very low.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25631768953 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55259421079 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9972312516 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.1818181818 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5909090909 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296480492952 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760726132293 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762362467365 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185721482022 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822779868215 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.34 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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