In today’s time the internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinion.
The Internet makes numerous opportunities, particularly for an education system. Online courses are become so popular because it is easy to take an advantage of learning while you are in a home. Unlike, some people believe that education should be hold in classroom. In my opinion, internet facilitates education, and make ease learning but there is drawbacks in this way exist. So I will discuss both views in the following.
Some people argue that the internet makes possible to give them more freedom while they are studying. It is evident that it could probably check their course content if they couldn’t participate the class online. Because the internet store the data and they could easily retrieve them whenever they want. Likewise, if somebody have a hectic schedules and they would like to take an advantage to study at the midnight, some online courses will available. So this vast opportunity for people gives them enormous power to choose what they want at any time.
However, traditional education still manipulate in many countries. The more people involve in education the more contribution will get. This means that if somebody wants to learn more efficient it is better to study in a group instead of studying at home. For instance, some statistics indicate that the efficiency of learning have doubled in classroom in compare with other mode of education like online learning. Moreover, it is apparent that the teacher have more authority in classroom and they could teach in different way. It might use group works method for teaching some subject or they examine student to present some principle for others with presentation. In this way, students will probably enhance their skills in, critical thinking, time management, and public speaking which is, in my opinion, essential for peoples.
In sum, internet have given a viable option for learning in a case if people haven’t enough time to go to the school. But, it is certainly beneficial if you study in a class due to different reasons like presentation skills or in general soft skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'held'?
Suggestion: held
...people believe that education should be hold in classroom. In my opinion, internet f...
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Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are drawbacks'?
Suggestion: there are drawbacks
...s education, and make ease learning but there is drawbacks in this way exist. So I will discuss bo...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...enever they want. Likewise, if somebody have a hectic schedules and they would like ...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to have'
Suggestion: to have
...ndicate that the efficiency of learning have doubled in classroom in compare with ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11436950147 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71784704884 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5042098053 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7894736842 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273108193697 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079959003409 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044793328158 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161101133613 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494840586179 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.