In today’s times internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinion.
Education is the indispensable aspect of human life. There are three basic needs of people namely food, shelter and clothing, but, in order to cope with this expeditiously growing world, education has become the fourth necessity of human life. Nowadays, the internet is permitting people to opt for courses from their home and limited the need to attend classrooms. Therefore, whether engaging in online studies is superior compared to classroom studies has always remained a topic of discussion.
Some people opine that online studies are more lucrative compared to physical studies. Their view is supported by a few noticeable reasons. Primarily, in this modern era, where every individual is occupied with a gruelling work schedule, online learning provides portability to study according to one's time frame. This allows people to complete certain courses in a flexible manner which is not true in the case of the classroom system. Moreover, learning through the internet is also acting fruitful for the working class, who do not have time to take admissions in colleges.
However, there is another school of thought which believes that classroom studies are indubitably better than internet studies. To my way of thinking this because classrooms provide more interactions between the tutor and fellow students and it is easier to catch hold the doubts in learning, in any. Face-to-face learning not only improves their social skills but also ignites the sense of punctuality by making the students attend regular classes. Furthermore, the teaching style of the mentor can also be changed in case some student find it difficult to understand.
By comparing and contrasting both the views, I completely believe and support the former one. Apart from already stated reasons, my conjecture is further substantiated by another unavoidable fact that online learning involves less cost as there is no need to buy books and travel to any far off place to attend lectures.
To encapsulate, the above-portrayed discussion and my proposed points clearly justify my belief that numerous benefits of studying online far overweigh the methodologies of classroom learning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a flexible manner" with adverb for "flexible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39411764706 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83727658298 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5563810124 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.625 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237076246141 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699775494431 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565972219725 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118958464621 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367282354707 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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