Today, some employees are not sociable with colleagues in their team. What are reasons of this and what measure can be suggested?
Nowadays, sociable capacity in workplace is now one of the most controversial issues that people like debating about. I guess what if when people organize a team randomly, especially at work, what impact on their life? In this essay, I will address my personal opinion and suggest effective methods of making achievable relationship.
The first reason why people do not get along with their colleagues is that striking a balance between household and work has been hard so that ,recently, many people would prefer hanging out with their real friends rather than their colleagues. Because if you go out or invite your co-workers, many of them do not ensure what topic is natural for conversation. Some kinds of their conversation would be sensitive and super personal. Perhaps, the conversations between both of them affect their working performance as well as the topic could be related to your work. Secondly, atmosphere among themselves may well have a hierarchy structure, but this assumption is that it depends on which company people work in. So the system leads to be distanced by their bosses and mangers and it led to a negative influence on work climates. Another reason is as IT technology has greatly changed those issues ever since chatting app is introduced. Some of employees feel still work even though they already finish their workload.
In my opinion, employers and employees should strive to make anti-stressful environment. For example, one of physiology research says generating new leisure in workplace trigger higher performance during the experiment, that time had given excessive workload though.
Due to those reasons, could be some of people hesitate to spend time with their co-workers unless personally someone who really is either shy or non-sociable. Also, the role of bosses is no more than to respect each other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the employees') or simply say ''Some employees''.
Suggestion: Some of the employees; Some employees
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Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
...ough. Due to those reasons, could be some of people hesitate to spend time with their co-wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, i guess, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20401337793 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81952692945 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658862876254 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5074775241 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.733333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272575584917 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752967198685 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579475800408 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131234270248 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078427609166 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.