Your neighbour has been making a lot of noise recently. This has been causing you problems, and you want to ask them to stop.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter:
-ask for an explanation for the noise
-explain the problems this has caused for you
-say what will happen if the problem is not solved
Dear neighbor,
I am writing to complain about the noise levels coming from your apartment in recent weeks.
Could you explain what is happening that is producing so much noise? I am really mystified as to what you could be doing. I can hardly have a conversation with someone sitting next to me, because it is so loud.
This situation is having a negative effect on my entire family. I have been unable to sleep properly, because of the noise levels even late at night. My son complains that he cannot focus on his homework, while even our don has been behaving oddly; she lost her appetite, and has no energy.
While I do not understand why this has become such a problem. I must ask you to reduce the amount of noise you make, and try to keep quiet during the evening when we are at home so that my son can do his schoolwork undisturbed. If this situation continues, I will have no choice but to make a noise complaint to the police and/or to the city council.
I trust you will make the necessary changes and that this will be the end of the matter.
Regards,
MJ
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.445 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40249349635 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5441911734 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8181818182 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204952980551 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675031784559 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410191037627 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105539899405 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337161867773 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.