Today we can see overconsumption of natural resources such as air, freshwater, oil and so on. The usage is increasing at a very dangerous pace and is already reaching critical levels. What are the reasons contributing to this? what should be done to minimize the effects?
There is no denying that human beings rely on natural resources in their surrounding and utilize them to cover their demands; however, the overconsumption of these resources make many people worry about the environment. With this in mind, I believe that several factors lead to this problem, two of which are as follows:
First, due to population growth, the demand for usage more resources increases. To be more specific, many statistics show the human population has been increasing dramatically, especially during recent decades, and this increased population need more resources such as water, fuel, and air to continue living. In fact, while natural resources are limited, overconsumption of them threaten their existence in our environment. In this situation, people need to learn how to control or even reduce their needs and consumption in effective ways to preserve these precious assets in the environment. These assets should be remained for next generations because their lives will extremely depend on them, as do we. For example, they can change their habits of consuming food and energy in economical ways during their lives with the aid of knowledge and technology they have access to. Therefore, given that the human population is increasing at an alarming pace, which poses a threat to natural resources, people should take proper actions to protect the environment by mitigating their consumptions.
Second, given the lack of strict rules, people don’t pay attention to the negative consequences of their extreme consumption of natural resources, resulting more depletion of resources. As is evident to anyone, when an issue can negatively the whole society or the majority of people, the government regulate laws in order to better manage the issue and prevent its possible adverse consequences. Indeed, the government should monitor people’s behaviors towards the environment and compel them to correct their consuming patterns. In addition, the government should pose some limitations to many factories. Which not only use a lot of fuel but also release a huge amount of deleterious gases into atmosphere. In this regard, it can punish them when they don’t obey the rules. As a result, the government should utilize its facilities and power to curb the overconsumption of resources by people and industries.
In conclusion, I am the opinion that natural resources are consuming extremely because of population growth and lack of severe laws to control the extreme consumption of resources by industries and people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40100250627 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95351472416 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541353383459 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2097021447 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.6875 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9375 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15943919848 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546833744346 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352113438999 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965463796757 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035359719075 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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