In many nations, there is a law which states organizations cannot deny a job as of the age of an applicant. In my view, this could not be applicable to all the companies because different jobs require different skills to fulfill a role in a proper manner.
To begin with, there are many jobs which require specified age group staff. Young looking employees are in demand for the profession of air hostesses and flight Stuart. Age specified staff is the demand for these types of jobs. In this case you cannot imagine a 40years around person doing this job which is not suitable and practical. If properly trained Young staff can handle emergency situations in a long flight efficiently than the older person.
Moreover, many jobs require muscular strength. Many retail stores require the workers to lift the heavy products and put it in shelves as a part of their job. This means that a middle age person will not be suitable for this work rather one can be good at cash counter in the same retail store where not much muscular work is required. This way the productivity is not compromised.
However, there are many jobs in which age specified skills are not required. For instance, in a teaching job it does not matter what is the age of the tutor rather concentration is on the skills the staff has. It depends on the education one has acquired.
To sum up, I think making it illegal for companies to choose the specified staff is not a healthy decision.
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- Some people think children are more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Discuss.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 56
- More and more people are now considering wearing fashionable clothes very important. Is it positive or negative? 22
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- topic:In some countries , it is illegal for companies to reject job applicant for their age. Is this positive or negative development. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...uire different skills to fulfill a role in a proper manner. To begin with, there are many jobs ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ob which is not suitable and practical. If properly trained Young staff can handle...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nds on the education one has acquired. To sum up, I think making it illegal for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, for instance, i think, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6833976834 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54487899856 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528957528958 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6376879677 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255278894144 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847291923736 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448733024538 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146060341541 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00643918267897 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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