The TV and the internet provide opportunity to ordinary people to become famous. Is this a positive or a negative development?
Advances in the telecommunication industry have transformed the ways in which people communicate with each other. Nowadays, satellite television and the internet render ample opportunities to individual to become well known. This essay agrees that this trend is a positive advancement as it acts as a neutral platform for people to demonstrate their talent and also the performers can reach to millions of people at the touch of a button.
To embark with, broadcasting shows over the internet or satellite television networks provide an unbiased platform for performers to showcase their talent. For instance, anyone can participate in a talent hunt competition such as the American Idol or can start their own channel on the social networking sites without needing help from the influential individuals of the community and can receive global recognition solely with their talent. Thus, satellite communication systems have increased the chances of common individuals to get worldwide fame.
In addition to this, the internet and other digital broadcasting services such as You Tube remove the geographical barrier which boosts the popularity of talented individuals. For example, thirty years ago, a performer has to travel to distant places to be able to gain fame; however, today a stand-up comedian from India can reach up to its audience sitting in the American continent at the touch of a button. Hence, technology has brought the entertainers and the audience together from different parts of the world.
In conclusion, communication breakthroughs have made it easier for the entertainers to connect with their audience from numerous geographical regions, and since the television and the internet provide fair chances to everyone to become celebrities, this is a positive development for sure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5017921147 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10572184061 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7822651561 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.5 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169752277772 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692024935401 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700294844984 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118751406299 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843859380425 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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