Nowadays, a regular person can become recognized overnight due to the influence of the online community and TV media. It is believed by some that this trend could bring positive impacts, at the same time, however, there is a body of opinion which holds that this tendency could be detrimental. In this essay, I will exam both sides of the debate to seek a conclusion.
To begin with, there is no doubt that this development will offer citizens extra amusements in their life, because more individuals are encouraged to show their talent publicly. In addition, it also provides common people chances to make decent income, according to the recent research the average income of a popular online host is 25% higher than a manager who works in a traditional office. Moreover, the internet and media industries will be boosted, as they have been attracting mounting attention from the audiences, which brings significant advertisement revenue.
On the other hand, this trend would demotivate students from obtaining academic achievements , because they are misled to believe that it is easier to become a cyber celebrity through internet and TV , therefore losing interests in attending higher education. Also, a sense of unfair treatment and resentfulness will occur among the public when more and more ordinary members become celebrated, for example, in china, audiences are extremely critical towards people who become acknowledged through TV programs such as Talent Show, consequently, negative public opinions sometime could severely harm those people’s life.
To summarize, there is no doubt that this development is beneficial to entertain the public and it also improves some people’s financial situation. At the same time, however, it also generates negative consequences on students and society . In the final analysis, therefore, we can only conclude that it could be a positive trend once schools and the government gives the proper guidance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41368078176 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90551164493 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612377850163 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.5704425263 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.090909091 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2727272727 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272179539451 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819084032693 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409431998039 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146183242938 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425421186744 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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