Universities accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In my opinion, mens and womens have the same educational rights is a necessity in society. However I do not agree that the proportion of males and females must be equal in each degree course.
To be honest, having the same numbers of male and female is simply unrealistic in all every subject university. Because the course must take a long time to balance the number of genders just started to directly affect the timeline of the project. In addition, many courses are more popular with one gender than the other so that it is difficult to aim for equal gender. For example, Information technology courses tend to attract male applicants, contrary to beauty courses which receive almost a application from females.
Despite sexual equality is necessary in life, I believe that accepting a degree course based on gender is unfair. Universities should continue to select the best candidate through their qualification. In this way, a candidate's motivation to apply to the course is a good grade result in school instead of distinguishing yourself as male or female. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it’s sure wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with lower grades and fewer qualifications.
In conclusion, mens and womens having the same right in education is good for society. However, they also should be chosen degree courses based on favour and qualification without regard to gender factor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95473251029 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79734912971 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0398999401 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197160185468 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700306314824 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781179888145 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109236397271 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640368101257 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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