Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every
subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The presence of females in universities becomes more familiar these days. One of the most conspicuous convictions is that the number of females in higher education should be as high as those numbers of men. When it comes to me, I definitely advocate this argument based on some following reasons.
In the first place, No matter what gender they are, people are certain to have the same capacity. Because human was born with the same innate capability, if a woman has a chance to immerse themselves into the best educational system, they absolutely can get the same achievement as her man peers. Moreover, in terms of the nature of work, while man is more suitable for construction, technology; woman also showcase their abilities in accountant, medication. An example is that world history recorded some prominent woman experts, namely, Marie Curie. The university will make a big loss if they reject those talented people.
In the second place, Not only are they extremely gifted, woman possesses some decent virtues that can lead to success. One of the preponderant characters is diligence, contributing to society through relentless hard-working and studying. Needless to say, man, though more age, can not be as patient as the same age woman. With great maternal instincts, females are renowned for their ability to keep calm in any scenario, and therefore they can spend a more long time researching certain knowledge. Besides, with the difference in personality, the presence of female make the educational setting become more diverse, including idea, creativity, and perspective. As a result, people have many different approaches to the same situation, which will make huge evolution and advancement for human beings.
All in all, if all factors are contemplated, we can be easy to reach a conclusion that universities should approve more females to continue their professional and academic paths.
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, as a result, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24509803922 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90724251433 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624183006536 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0414229961 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.086705766415 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308374503177 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433761253914 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680109876745 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487111957567 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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