Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.
Do you agree or disagree?
In recent times, computer is the most significant invention that human have. Not only bring people together, but also helping us on gaining more knowledge. Especially, some develop country having primary school system that encourage the student to use computer as a study equipment. In my opinion, by using computer correctly, computer bring more advantages to our young generation than bad habits.
As we know that smart devices bring the convenient for our work and study, while in the past, most of the student gained knowledge by limitation of books or resources that they had in their area. One benefit of computer is providing our children a great source of knowledge with various type of media such as: book, magazine, newspaper, TV programs, etc. For example, Kids are attracting to different type of learning methods which computer can reach to the resources through out internet. Not only that, computer also bring the adaption of technology to our young generation faster, let them curious about the widen of our world rather than the small town in which they lived.
In the other hand, without the control of using smart devices, the curiousness as well as unable to identify between good or bad programs for kids, therefore, children maybe poison with harmful channel such as doing risky challenges, games with violation content or horror movie and more. Parents play an important role in educating their children on using computer to avoid the negative effect.
With the point given above, I think that computer is one of the best study equipment that our young generation have to understand and learn more knowledge, and that positive effect will be maintaining if their parents taking care of there kids by managing how and what content that their child is searching.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...ich computer can reach to the resources through out internet Not only that computer also br...
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Line 2, column 595, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eneration faster let them curious about the widen of our world rather than the small town...
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Line 2, column 664, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... than the small town in which they lived In the other hand without the control of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95254237288 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43168304834 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 295.0 20.2975951904 1453% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1461.0 106.682146367 1369% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 295.0 20.7667163134 1421% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 104.0 7.06120827912 1473% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229444594043 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229444594043 0.084324248473 272% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14202472316 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508297820986 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 149.4 13.0946893788 1141% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -219.49 50.2224549098 -437% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 117.2 11.3001002004 1037% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.91 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.91 8.58950901804 255% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 120.0 10.1190380762 1186% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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