Write about the following topic.
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Commercializing is one of the most important feature of a business development. Through advertisement, there are lots of benefits such as helping customer to understand more about the product they are going to buy, however, advertising can attract people to buy product that they do not need. In my opinion, advertisement will only hamful to us if we do not know how to pick up the information, the final reason of an advertisement is providing product information to improve human lifestyle.
The first reason that a business promote their product by showing their goods on newspaper or television is introducing what is the use and benefit from the product can help your lives. For example, smartphone is a significant product that I believe most people nowadays use for their convienion. Lots of different company advertising their product such as SamSung, LG, Apple,..for customer to understand more the features that they have in their phones.
However, without researching and consideration, commercialize activities can lead consummers to buy goods which may not be use according to their lifestyle. In recents time, business learn more about customer behaviour to achive the target they need. For instant, a pops-up banner appear on the website while you are reading news tell you an extreme benefit deals on a coffee machine that you love to have due to your search history, although you are not drinking coffee, but you will buy it and still think that it worth to buy.
Therefore, I would say that, there are numorous of advertisements on media, they will show you what are the benefits and features that improve our lives. Choose the product wisely so you will not be affected to buy unneccesory goods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...and still think that it worth to buy Therefore I would say that there are numorous of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95774647887 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82965423097 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524647887324 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 284.0 20.2975951904 1399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1408.0 106.682146367 1320% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 284.0 20.7667163134 1368% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 94.0 7.06120827912 1331% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285542268407 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.285542268407 0.084324248473 339% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172536748047 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685322871153 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 143.9 13.0946893788 1099% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -216.78 50.2224549098 -432% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 114.1 11.3001002004 1010% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.97 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.73 8.58950901804 241% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 115.6 10.1190380762 1142% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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