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new Roman","serif""> it is believed that there are lots of cars to use of fosil fuel in the world and so enviroment can be effected so much by people. Almost governments have been trying new solution ways for decades, but they did not succeed on this issue as they did not manage people for using these methods. In my opinion, if governments increase price of fossil fuel, ıt can effect on people badly, therefore they have to present new solutions such as electrical cars or solar energy.
new Roman","serif""> First of all, our enviroment have been damaged for decades by using fossil fuel and also nobody cared about this issue but nowadays people started to realise something on using fossil fuel, but their budgets are acting so important role on this situation. people can use to make new solutions but they need government or other community to support them.
new Roman","serif""> On the other hand, people want to manage their budget for their’s life and then they want to do lots of social activities but they spent much money for using fosil fuel. they think if they decrease fosil fuel, they can spent much money for other activities, actually government have to use this issue to decrease using fosil fuel. therefore, they need to find cheaper than methods for it. For instance, people like electronic car and use them on their life. İt is cheaper than car which uses fossil fuel.
new Roman","serif""> Consequently, there is no doubt that, people don’t want to use fossil fuel for next generations burt increasing price is not good solution to solve this problem. Experts have to make good alternative ways for people and government need to encourage their citizen to use alternative methods. I think it will be better than on the future and there will be more educated person in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, i think, no doubt, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17419354839 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.46430635345 2.80592935109 159% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9327542205 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.384615385 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308248192018 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151802310511 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138842372234 0.0667982634062 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248350600205 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065741587327 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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