Violence in the media promotes violence in society.
To what extent do you agree?
The news plays a vital role in the life of people, it is a source to the public, what is going around the world, it is the best platform for our upcoming generation. media showcase various types such as politics, Technology, Lifestyle and etc., In this essay, I am going to explain the role of the media in our society.
I think that some information like religious views is to be avoided for promoting to the people. In order to avoid violence in society. media is the best source to promote something like inspiration videos to the upcoming youngster. it is our responsibility to look at the information just to gain knowledge of what is going around the Globe. But, not to take it personally, we have to look at it and move around. we have to take the best part from it like developing skills such that listening, speaking which can be used in shaping the upcoming future. Either to take the negative part such that religious, politics matter from it.
Although, the idea behind the promotion of the news is to increase the "TRP ratings" through it to generate revenue from it, In order to increase the ratings it usually tries to give the information first in the first compare to other channels, without knowing the real fact what has happened actually. Therefore, it is our duty to know the fact what has happened. so, in this way we have to wait till the end of the story.
To sum up, I would like to tell that to some extent the media is responsible in creating violence in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, look, so, therefore, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57195571956 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61668111487 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50184501845 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7394940434 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3076923077 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161034839403 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601741050454 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629531437567 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108860334097 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588664339423 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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