Is virtual reality more than just for fun?
There is a controversial issue about the role of virtual reality in life. Some gamers state that it has become more than a leisure time activity, while some parents argue that it cannot go beyond the role of entertainment. In this essay, I will consider both points of view and agree with the idea of growth of on-line world over its original limits.
Let us start with the reasons why some gamers think that virtual reality has grown into more than a type of entertainment. The first reason is that it allows people to work from home. A growing number of employees have turned their home into offices, because their employers allow them to do their duties remotely. Another reason is that people can communicate with other people on the Internet. The geographical constrains no longer limit people in communication, since the web allows them to make and chat with friends from all over the world. In fact, many single people even find their halves on social networking websites.
However, some parents believe that alternative reality is solely for amusement. They justify their point of view with the following arguments. Firstly, it cannot substitute face-to-face conversation. People may spend most of their time living on-line, but they will have to admit the fact that real world is more important and accept the reality around them. Secondly, the Internet is unreliable for dating. Many gullible people get cheated by offenders, who pretend to be a beautiful girl or handsome man. As a result, their victims lose money, but luckily they change their attitude about the virtual world.
In conclusion, even though some parents say that alternative world is incapable to break its limits, I think that it has already transformed human life and guides people how to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding reality'?
Suggestion: the surrounding reality
...real world is more important and accept the reality around them. Secondly, the Internet is unreliable f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00673400673 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57393258558 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3708303664 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4705882353 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151929149885 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517603112036 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716804836396 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875374772819 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560426768874 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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