Visual impairment
In these modern days, people have a tendency to suffer visual impairment rather than in the past. Admittedly, having visual impairment means that you no longer have the ability to see and suffer from many inconveniences in life. Indeed, people with visual impairment have to tackle numerous difficulties and even being laughed in public. Additionally, this problem makes them feel ashamed about themselves and gradually leads to some serious mental diseases. In my opinion, the only way to solve this problem is preventing it from happening. Despite the rapid development of medicine, there is not a completely useful treatment for this impairment. As a result, we should make every endeavor to prevent it such as eating a wide range of red-colored foods to provide vitamin A to our bodies and do not spend a large amount of time on watching electronic services. The better we prevent, the less we have to suffer this problem.
- Visual impairment 56
- For some people making a lot of money is an important goal Others think that their free time is more important than wealth Which is more important to you Explain giving specific reasons for your choice 67
- Some university students move away and live on their own while they are attending school but others live at home with their family while they are students Which do you think is a better choice Give reasons to explain your answer 84
- You have recently had a class discussion about the importance of taking care of your health Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay giving your opinions on the following statement It is more important to be healthy than to be rich 56
- In 120 to 150 words write a letter requesting information about the course Coping with loneliness 53
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 154.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01948051948 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80414993768 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688311688312 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9834416765 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227468480739 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104686598351 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136045207566 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227468480739 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.