Walking is known to be beneficial for health and yet fewer and fewer people are walking these days.
What are the reasons for this?
What can be done to tackle this problem?
In this day and age, despite the benefits of walking, there are more and more people do not care of this kind of exercise. In this paragraph, I would discuss about the increase in transportations which leads to this problem and the way to solve it by encouraging people to do more athletes.
The proliferate of vehicles is an important reason why many human beings less go on street on foot. There are more and more private use of transports and also the public transportations. This rise is resulted in more and more people fall victim to dependence on vehicles. For example, youngers in today's world do not much used to walk on street, instead of that, they use motorcycles or buses to go to school or work.
The problem borns to be solved and one of many efficent ways to do that it is encourage humans to join gyms and athletic clubs to do more exercises. This solution does not just increase people's average health, it also helps many people get a base of good habits such as reducing the quantity of obesity and laziness in teenagers.
To summarize, I believe that because of the raise of transport's quantity, fewer walkers are appeared on streets and cheering human beings to exercise more in gyms and clubs is needed to eludicate this phenomenon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ncouraging people to do more athletes. The proliferate of vehicles is an important reason why ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64125560538 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66419043536 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569506726457 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6691851091 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214527730243 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867220152025 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397146820384 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12936933195 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194397815385 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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