Walking is known to be beneficial for health and yet fewer and fewer people are walking these days.
What are the reasons for this?
What can be done to tackle this problem?
It is true that walking has a number of positive effects on a person’s health; however, the amount of people taking a walk is decreasing day by day. In this essay, I am going to consider why it is happening and what measures can be taken in order to encourage the public to walk more.
The main reason of reducing of a walking habit among citizens is that modern people are living in a high-speed society where everyone trying to accomplish a great deal of goals. As a result, a lot of individuals are living in a state of rush and completely neglect their health. In addition, nowadays vehicles have become much cheaper in a contrast with previous decades and a huge amount of people own cars or motorcycles and consider more convenient to move by car rather than on foot. For instance, when my brother had bought a car, he started to use it even in a short distance, such as a convenient store two blocks from our house.
Nevertheless, the authorities may address this issue by implementing high transport taxes for those who is using automobiles inside a city. Thus, it would be more advantageous to walk than use a transport. As well as this, social media should promote walking and other physical exercises explaining to the general public how they are beneficial for human health especially in terms of combating obesity and cardiovascular diseases. To illustrate, as it is known, today, a great number of people have got medical conditions related to overweight, but they are not aware that 20 minutes’ walk per day may significantly improve their state of health. Thus, it would be helpful to enlighten them through mass media and press.
In conclusion, lack of walking among habitats of a country is caused by a fast pace of the modern society and absence of necessity to walk due to a boost in the vehicle production industry. Meanwhile, this trend can be reduced by promotion of health benefits from such a simple thing as brisk walking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: transport
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Suggestion: public
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75953079179 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78821020543 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592375366569 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5660269047 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.846153846 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334311939727 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104156320847 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618694795428 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197473178299 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839460505183 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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