water is a natural resource that should always be free. Governments should ban the sale of bottled water.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of bottled water which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that is beneficial
while others reject this notion. The substantial Influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my
opinion the latter proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will explicated the reasons attributing to this trend in the looming paragraphs.
Analyzing the statement and explaining further; the first and the foremost reason behind this is that, plastic water bottles add to litter and waste problems. Most of the bottles are making from garbage and rubbish which is producing lot of contamination. Another striking reason in this regards is that companies should not be able to make a profit from natural resource as everyone has right to keep and drink water. Categorically discussing. It cannot be ignored that the main issue behind this is that their is no difference in quality between bottled and tap water.
Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reason stems from the fact is that governments should ensure that everyone has access to clean tap water. Moving further, It is pertinent to mention that the authority should banned bottled water due to it is coming from natural resource. Apart from the reasons mentioned above it can be clearly stated why many are against of this trend.
In conclusion, according to the arguments above, one can reach to a conclusion that the drawbacks of bottled water
are indeed too dire to ignore. Thus, I believe that governments should take some steps to resolve this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus, while, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16165413534 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65214573236 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582706766917 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2312194745 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262131709367 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870747664426 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746446583491 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110351912564 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773988090944 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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