Water is a natural resource that should always be free. Governments should ban the sale of bottled water.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of bottled water which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that is beneficial
while others reject this notion. The substantial Influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my
opinion the latter proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will explicated the reasons attributing to this trend in the looming paragraphs.
Analyzing the statement and explaining further; the first and the foremost reason behind this is that, plastic water bottles add to litter and waste problems. Most of the bottles are making from garbage and rubbish which is producing lot of contamination. Another striking reason in this regards is that companies should not be able to make a profit from natural resource as everyone has right to keep and drink water. Categorically discussing. It cannot be ignored that the main issue behind this is that their is no difference in quality between bottled and tap water.
Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reason stems from the fact is that governments should ensure that everyone has access to clean tap water. If stop producing bottled water, people will be get benefited from storage water of rain. Moving further, It is pertinent to mention that the authority should banned bottled water due to it is coming from natural resource. Apart from the reasons mentioned above it can be clearly stated why many are against of this trend.
In conclusion, according to the arguments above, one can reach to a conclusion that the drawbacks of bottled water are indeed too dire to ignore. Thus, I believe that governments should take some fruitful measures to resolve this problem.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'explicate'
Suggestion: explicate
...rs to be more rational. This essay will explicated the reasons attributing to this trend i...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ntamination. Another striking reason in this regards is that companies should not be...
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Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...that the main issue behind this is that their is no difference in quality between bot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus, while, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15957446809 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63905321682 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6537909597 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282461530041 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939269109928 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769527836639 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127712581451 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946895156432 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'explicate'
Suggestion: explicate
...rs to be more rational. This essay will explicated the reasons attributing to this trend i...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ntamination. Another striking reason in this regards is that companies should not be...
^^^^
Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...that the main issue behind this is that their is no difference in quality between bot...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus, while, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15957446809 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63905321682 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6537909597 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.928571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282461530041 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939269109928 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769527836639 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127712581451 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946895156432 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.