Water is in short supply in many countries of the world, but consumption of water by families is increasing. Why is this happening? What can be done to preserve water?
There is no doubt that many countries are short on water; however, some people believe that despite this shortage, the average usage of water for household purposes has increased. In this essay I will discuss the causes of this increase, and how we can maintain it.
In recent years, the population has increased exponentially, but the patterns of water consumption have not changed in families. There are several chores which need water at home, all of them under the category of hygiene. Taking baths, washing dishes and clothes are among these chores which consume a lot of water. The problem is that people have not changed how they used to do these tasks, in order to preserve water. In other words, they still take hour long baths every day, or wash their dishes under running water. To put simply, nobody realizes the importance of water, because it has always been there.
I believe the most important thing to consider about this issue, is educating people about water, and its preservation methods through TV and social media. Take cleaning dishes as example, instead of washing them under running water, one can fill the sink with water and wash them inside that. It has been shown that this simple change can reduce waste by 40 percent; however, most of the people don't practice it simply because they do not know anything about it.
To summarize, I believe that the water problem has caused by increase in population and the fact that new generations are not taught both the significance of water, and the methods of preserving it. Hence, we need to educate them and the role of mass media is undeniably important for that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...40 percent; however, most of the people dont practice it simply because they do not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, still, no doubt, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83687943262 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3505476365 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6203394566 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.923076923 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323212078813 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120266573395 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655512989409 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207231779507 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474017341541 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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