We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
Computers, undoubtedly, are becoming popular in each and every department of life. However, it is generally argued that people are rapidly adopting computers in trade, health, catching criminals and plane flying. I tend to discuss the possible uses of computers in coming years and also their usefulness.
As a matter of fact, computers are being widely used in each aspect of life due to the ability to cut down the mental labor and giving better results in short span of time. For instance, computers can help to maintain the records of production, labor cost, profit and loss in no time with the option to save them and make changes anytime. Similarly, computers are helping in complex surgeries, disease detection and their cure with confidence of accurate results. Computers are assisting the police forces to get clues in a particular crime and reducing the time and money factors to get the quick results. In addition to the previous point, Computers are offering their great services to fly aeroplanes with most technical abilities as well as producing zero error. Therefore, we can say that computers are sharing their contribution everywhere because of their accuracy with little time and replacing human efforts with machines.
As far as the future use of computer is concerned, its scope in each unit of life is undeniable. Computers can be used to replace a teacher, a doctor, a sweeper, a driver and even a chef. For example, two students in America are running successfully a restaurant with the help of robots where the customers feedback are beyond their expectations. Hence there are many chances that the future of computer is very bright.
Although there are some disadvantages of this trend but the graphs of advantages are holding higher values so their importance cannot be ignored. Firstly, they are saving time in a busy life as everyone prefers to get their work done fast. Secondly, they can work every time with no leave or tiredness and there is no worry for limited working hours as seen in human work. Lastly, computers can work more precisely than man and we can rely on their complex calculations which are beyond the limits of employees. So, we can say that the advantages of using computers are much more and should be encouraged.
To recapitulate, Computer is a commendable discovery of 20th century and is helping man in multiple ways. We should work to grab more benefits from it and should be used in a positive manner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...urant with the help of robots where the customers feedback are beyond their expectations....
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Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...feedback are beyond their expectations. Hence there are many chances that the future ...
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Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ore benefits from it and should be used in a positive manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2056.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95421686747 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69495208298 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546987951807 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.792884424 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223572408424 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751325828381 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670790327933 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136170857595 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384322723191 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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