We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. In which more fields will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more cautious about their benefits?
In this world of globalization, computer takeover almost every sector of the world. It helps in every field like learning, enterprises, medical, transgression and to airport. While computer are beneficial and speed up our pace of life it can be harmful from some ways.
We can do many more things for a developed future.
Firstly, in space astronauts can make equipments to discover new planets and places that's cant be reach easily. In addition, they can check necessities of life on that places if, they can provide or not like water and oxygen. Furthermore, in next years people can be able to increase their memory by inserting microchips in their brain and storing all their data in that devices and use them when it needed.
Computers do so many things beyond our imagination. As we know, it can detect drugs from anything that contains it, in doing so we can take that drug dealers to end who are ruining our societies. Moreover, in the future we can easily access to any data from all our the world that will have make our work quickly but we can also prone to security threat in this situation. To illustrate this, cyber crime will increase and every individual privacy is in commination. But we can cope up with these problems by announcing some strict rules for the usage of internet.
In the essence, where computers gives us so many benefits, there is also drawbacks of it but it can’t be insurmountable. We just have to make some regulations to control it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76356589147 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67981984637 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600775193798 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0035712691 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7857142857 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222539427964 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771802191398 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293092551662 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123634682203 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206268475814 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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