Traffic has become a nuisance especially in the metro cities where people encounters lot of traffic jams while going to their office daily. Increasing petrol prices is one of the possible solution, put forward by some people. I completely disagree to this statement. In this essay I will present my views against this statement and also put forward some solutions in my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, petrol is the driving force for the most number of transport we see on roads, increasing prices will not only impact the direct users but also increses the inflation thus having impact of prices of other goods. There are numerous other reasons due to which increasing price of petrol is not a solution at all, first and foremost, petrol is a safe fuel as compared to other fuels also create less pollution when compared to diesel. So, if the use of petrol will decrease, people will move to other fuels which create more pollution hence increasing the air pollution. Secondly, petrol engines are cost effective as they involve less machinery and its structure is also simple as compared to other engines. Discouragement of petrol will decrease the demand of petrol engines, thus other engines will be employed in vehicle which are expensive thus increasing the cost of the vehicles.
Apparently, we need to find other solution for the problem of traffic jams and pollution. To start with, ovehaul of the existing road system can sooth the traffic problem. Roads are built when rarely a people can afford a car, nowadays, when everyone have a car we need much wider road to commute. Further, make the public transport more efficent and reliable so that people start preferring them over private vehicles, it will address both the problems. Furthermore, we need to explore the alternative fuel which is more safe and ecofriendly such as solar energy or electric charge. It will help not only in enviorment conservation but also benfit them economically.
In conclusion, instead of increasing the cost and give rise to another set of challenges. We need to innovate the technology so that permanent solution to the problems of traffic and pollution can be found. Renewable resources is the future of energy we need to make advancement in that direction, use of petrol will gradually decrease without making any steps to prohibit it's use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 373, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ase without making any steps to prohibit its use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0076142132 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65283796712 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522842639594 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3836456654 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.611111111 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335391333125 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996339139183 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588082902456 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18175961012 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482294144558 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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