We live in a world of technology these days.While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages.
It is mentioned that, even though internet provides many benefits to people, the challenges on controlling and securing information surpass the advantages which are generated in this technological era.In my opinion, the new technology brings numerous supports along with the inherited defaults to the internet users.
Internet evolves with the developments and inventions in the technology sector.This helps people to do their day to day activities more efficiently and effectively, saving more time which can be utilized in other productive things.For example, e-commerce , e-banking and e-shopping systems allow people to do their grocery shopping and payments at their home without visiting the shops physically.So,Internet users can wisely invest their valuable time in other decision making processes.
Another point to consider is the sustainability.In contrast to the manual works and procedures, internet requires less amount of resources to operate.As a result of that, the resource wastage can be minimized since all the information is stored digitally in the networks.Furthermore, human resources a re also utilized more efficiently in to various services and productions.
However, as it often happens with any development, internet also has its own drawbacks.Controlling and securing the information fed in to the internet systems have become the biggest obstacles.With the development of technological advances, experts are also generated to get the benefits from the loop holes .For instance, a group of hackers were able to transfer millions of dollars from the central bank of Bangladesh to some other Asian banks in the region.Controlling is on of the biggest challenges, since there is no identified limit of internet and securing information is also becoming more difficult to handle.
In conclusion, internet gives number of advantages to its users in many ways, while it is proned to the inherited managing and information security risks.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7074829932 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52543350716 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574829931973 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.124918457 49.4020404114 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.6 106.682146367 315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.8 20.7667163134 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.0 7.06120827912 397% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252107882459 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143874041443 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804010069127 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143874041443 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804010069127 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.9 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.31 50.2224549098 -9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.62 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...are generated in this technological era.In my opinion, the new technology brings n...
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Suggestion: This
...and inventions in the technology sector.This helps people to do their day to day act...
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Suggestion: For
... be utilized in other productive things.For example, e-commerce , e-banking and e-s...
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...roductive things.For example, e-commerce , e-banking and e-shopping systems allow ...
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Suggestion: So
...e without visiting the shops physically.So,Internet users can wisely invest their ...
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...without visiting the shops physically.So,Internet users can wisely invest their valuable ...
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...point to consider is the sustainability.In contrast to the manual works and proced...
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...res less amount of resources to operate.As a result of that, the resource wastage ...
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...to some other Asian banks in the region.Controlling is on of the biggest challenges, since ...
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Suggestion: one
...sian banks in the region.Controlling is on of the biggest challenges, since there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7074829932 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52543350716 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574829931973 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.124918457 49.4020404114 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.6 106.682146367 315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.8 20.7667163134 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.0 7.06120827912 397% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252107882459 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143874041443 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804010069127 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143874041443 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804010069127 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.9 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.31 50.2224549098 -9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.62 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.