Weddings are more expensive in many countries in comparison to the past What is the reason behind this Is this a positive or a negative development

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Weddings are more expensive in many countries in comparison to the past. What is the reason behind this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, there is an increasing tendency of overspending in weddings. When compared to earlier generations, wedding ceremonies were much simpler and economical. I believe that this is a totally negative development and has many unpleasant effects on marriage generally.

The main reason behind this inflation in wedding expenditures is introducing many new costly “extras” in wedding party which were not considered in the past. To illustrate, wedding planners, lighting system, rich buffet and multi-tier wedding cake, expensive decorations that embellish hall entrance, wedding stages and tables’ centerpieces with large amounts of flowers. Additionally, the introduction of more fashionable groom tuxedos and bride gowns that are considerably expensive compared with similar one in the past. All these factors have contributed to other costs that led to such increase in weddings’ expenses.

This unprecedented exaggeration in wedding cost has led to many negative consequences. Firstly, it over burden the newly married couple with unnecessary expenses while they might be already in debt to cover marriage requirements. If weddings were less expensive like former generations, couple would efficiently use this extra money to pay any pending installment or even use it to travel or start a new project to help them improve their income. Secondly, the increased demand on wedding accessories used for decoration, buffet and costumes has led to continuous increase in its market value which has become in some cases over budget for those who want to make simple wedding like in the past.

To sum up, the extra ornaments introduced to various details in wedding ceremony are the key contributors in making it increasingly expensive when compared to the past. Such increase has led to unfavorable outcomes on recently married couples and has inflated the market price of traditional wedding requirements.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in some cases, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65979381443 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18238292513 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5292874545 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.692307692 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291007602299 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10507617365 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872353628167 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170679591132 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052917962239 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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