Nowadays, our lives have become very different that from past and acquisition of knowledge has become a trend to live a lavish life. Present days people are more prone to studying abroad and later on to settle in other country .It is advantageous to live and settle outside the developing country as it opens up the door to many opportunities and sometimes it has downside effect also.
On the one hand, to leave our own country specially developing countries to moving abroad brings lots of opportunities to an individual and for their family and later on they will come up with better paid off salaries in comparison, to the ones who are taking diploma from local universities. Moreover, the person studying abroad gets the real life experiences which will became their assets in remaining life and they also gains the chance to meet people from different cultures, languages and traditions which will later on help them in their travel around the world.
On the other hand, studying abroad causes the person to lose the national identity and also feeling of isolation arises on a later date. For instance, People after completing their studies become reluctant to move to their native country. Therefore they prefer to stay in foreign country rather than going back.
In conclusion, studying abroad bring a lot of advantages and disadvantages depending on individual preferences and personality. Whereas it is seems that people who are taking their degrees and diplomas from foreign universities have bright chances to secure a god job.
- Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view. 73
- What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to study abroad? 56
- Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally Discuss both sides and give your opinion 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...es and sometimes it has downside effect also. On the one hand, to leave our own c...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'gain'
Suggestion: gain
... assets in remaining life and they also gains the chance to meet people from differen...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...uctant to move to their native country. Therefore they prefer to stay in foreign country ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11417322835 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69611461887 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570866141732 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.418115621 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.333333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228744347829 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965857939926 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859298643882 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139802382487 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143720306051 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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