Nowadays, people are more concerned about their goals. But, other persons select a job according to the respect and honor at the present according to them pay will be given to them. I think that selecting a role in which you are satisfied. In this essay, I will try to discuss both views and try to draw some conclusion.
Firstly, I believe that select a career in your interest field. For example, if you select a job out of interest you will not enjoy the work you will end up with stress and anxiety, it leads to disaster. Therefore, select a career in your own field of interest.
Secondly, I think that select a job according to the financial status. For instance, if you are not supporting your family to give needs. such as Education, Health, and accommodation then you will be a failure in the end. Further, it is very important in choosing a career wisely.
On the other hand, some people believe that selecting a job according to social status, will also end up with a happy and healthy life. Every person has their own belief in seeing the world in selecting their requirement. I cannot judge anyone for selecting a career.
In conclusion, I think that selecting a career according to the interested field and financial support to the loved ones then you will be happy with the work and personal life. it depends on you what is right and correct for your carrer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61133603239 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53494969158 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502024291498 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0453691438 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1875 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349002054684 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116936019861 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555957355684 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209851760018 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448613297358 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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