what can be done to help relieve stress in college?
Student has to deal with problems aout score and examination, the mature must confront with many issue about financial. It is true that college student is combination both student and mature’s problems. As a result, they are under a lot of pressure, so how can we tackle this phenomenon? To assist college student overcomes stresses and becomes better.
One of the effective sollutions is taking up playing an instrument.according to some researches,musical training can change brain structure and functionfor the better. Simulataneously, decreasing the levels os stress hormones.
Another solution that can convert stress out of their brain is participating in some clubs at school and the extracurriculums actively. Joining possitively helps them has no time for negative thinkings, moreover they can also make friends with a lot of people, and gradually becoming a optimistist.
Ultimately, it is a fact that nearly eighty percentages college student’s pressure come from financial problems for living expense. Especially, on the final of month due to using money unreasonably, so the most imperative sollution for this phenomenon is control themselves from buying immensely, just should have purchased something that really necessary. They will redress the balance and relieving stresses.
To sum up, to cope with issues that stress caused for college student. All they can do is learning to play an instrument, becoming a member of some clubs that they concerned, and using money suitably.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-11-27 | kuldip.kumar@hotmail.com | 78 | view |
| 2023-10-02 | kuldip.kumar@hotmail.com | 89 | view |
| 2023-09-10 | Nowshin Tabassum | 70 | view |
| 2023-08-31 | chino0301 | 78 | view |
| 2023-08-20 | hitakshi patel | 78 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun issue seems to be countable; consider using: 'many issues'.
Suggestion: many issues
...amination the mature must confront with many issue about financial It is true that college...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'levels'' or 'level's'?
Suggestion: levels'; level's
...e better Simulataneously decreasing the levels os stress hormones Another solution th...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... a lot of people and gradually becoming a optimistist Ultimately it is a fact th...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, really, so, as to, as a result, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36796536797 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08090709548 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627705627706 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 231.0 20.2975951904 1138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1240.0 106.682146367 1162% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 231.0 20.7667163134 1112% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 69.0 7.06120827912 977% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192101093188 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192101093188 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103325743257 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019347211253 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 119.4 13.0946893788 912% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -171.45 50.2224549098 -341% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 94.6 11.3001002004 837% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.35 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.54 8.58950901804 227% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 94.4 10.1190380762 933% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 95.0 10.7795591182 881% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.