Most youngsters want to become a celebrity. What are the effects of stardom? Discuss
Nowadays, society has become materialistic due to invention of modern technology and social media. Therefore, it is argued that major portion of young generation has desired to become a well known person. there are myriad positive and negative implications of this cause which I will elucidate in following paragraphs.
To commence with, being a star has many advantages this could be the reason that most of the youth pine for it. Firstly, popular people earn indispensible income because of their stardom by doing advertisement and movies which is next to impossible in the case of common man. Secondly, wherever famous people go, they get special treatment and hospitality. In addition to that, there millions of followers who shower tremendous love and respect that cannot be imagined in other profession. Finally, celebrities live luxury lifestyles and use lavishing cars which allure the youngsters to become well known.
However, there are multiple benefits of being a celebrity, drawbacks cannot be neglected. As a public figure, famous people have to behave in a certain manner because if a tiny mistake has been occurred by them then they have to face criticism. For example, film stars cannot smoke publically as their followers may imitate them and do the same thing. Another disadvantage is that popular people cannot travel in the streets like normal ones due to their stardom. Moreover, famous people have to sacrifice their private because wherever they go, they are followed by paparazzi. Hence, these are the con of becoming a star.
In conclusion, by contemplating both the merits and demerits, I can opine that this is a negative development as demerits are more as compared to merits. Furthermore, it is recommended that, youngster should circumspect all the facets before making any decisions to become famous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27891156463 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83634314334 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6026113318 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113786034982 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360483570805 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357237100304 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668005756803 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127187878995 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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