When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often observed that in modern time the architectural advancement is utilized and implemented to create the unmatched appearance of today's edifices. However, a certain set of the population believe that the most significant part of the building is the objective of building it. In my opinion, I partially agree with the forth mentioned statement and in this essay, I will describe more.

To commence with, from antiquity it has been marked with unique and strong monuments, which are an exemplary piece of art and strength. Furthermore, with the current technology, we can reduce the price and time of construction without sacrificing, and leaving for any aspect of vulnerability. In addition, a certain structure of buildings are their identity, for instance, temples, police stations, hospitals, which can make people to simply recognize them by a look. In a recent piece of article by prominent "The Times", around sixty percent of buildings which have artistic facades attract more people. Consequently, while constructing a public building or area, keeping this perspective could be beneficial like marts, public park, museums, and many more.

On the other hand, computer-aided designing appears to be remarkably profitable for engineers, who are now acceding the limitations of nature and presents a considerable craft. Apart from this, it is not inevitable the basic purpose of construction, if a building is looking good but unable to satisfy the purpose it is a waste. According to an empirical survey conducted by London's "Oxford University", ascertained that around fifty percent of government construction is not mended to attract the peoples, instead their individual motive is to provide adequate safety and security to the human and non-human resources. Certainly, some buildings do not need that much attention like general home, schools, hospitals, police stations, and many more.

To conclude, to construct a building just for the specific purpose fulfillment is surely satisfy the motive of the edifice, yet with the assistance of technological advancement we can enhance the beauty, strength and probable business profit, also, it can mark the unique status in the world of architecture.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'satisfied'.
Suggestion: satisfied
... specific purpose fulfillment is surely satisfy the motive of the edifice, yet with the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, so, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49855072464 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16676449953 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605797101449 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6484771675 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.923076923 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5384615385 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0778985868394 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297009957196 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363104856516 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501933322283 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301089638537 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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