Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
“Best of Luck”, is what we hear from our family and friends whenever we start any important task or go for any examination. Many people strongly believe that their luck plays an important role in achieving their goal or to the path of success, and bluntly blame it when they fail. However, I think that there are other factors that contribute to the achievements of a person.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">The two main keys to success </span>are hard work and determination. Knowledge and experience gained from your hard work will certain that you get success and prosperity in your life. There are many examples of successful people who have achieved goals in their life by their hard work and dedication. Sachin Tendulkar is not called “God of Cricket” merely by his luck, but his continuous practice and dedication towards the game, since his childhood. Going by the routine followed by successful people, it is seen that they wake up early in the morning and work throughout the day until late hours, to meet their targets. Hence, one has to devote time and instill the best of one’s efforts to achieve the aim.
On the other hand, luck may play a minor role in one’s achievement. Luck may make you rich by winning a lottery once in a lifetime; but if you stop earning and working to maintain your fortune, it will not last for long. People who merely rely on their luck tend to fail most of the time. For example, if a student, who does not study for the whole year and believes that his luck will make his pass his exams, may ruin his career.
To conclude, I strongly believe that working hard to achieve your goals will ensure success and just relying on luck will result in disappointments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, as to, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87099672975 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9546873059 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165542321311 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645539437396 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042185098997 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104374546625 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267583784475 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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