Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little that can be done to rectify this.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion, that the one who controls TV and newspapers, in turn, controls points of view of the whole society. As far as I can judge, this is true, but to some extent, which depends on the educational level of people.
First, I would like to say that there are many people who believe in all the news about, for example, politics and celebrities’ life from their TV-set. In the first place, I guess, it is true for older people. For example, there is a lot of pensioners who keen on political news in Russia and the Ukraine nowadays. However, I would like to believe, that the youth do not like politics, but they tend to create an attitude to any person, relying on someone else’s judgements. Unfortunately, in this case, young people are insensitive to statements, which conflict with their own point of view and they change it unwillingly. Thus, the mass media is able to create a profitable opinion about everyone and everything.
Secondly, the main reason to deny a point of view of the mass media is critical thinking. Critical thinking is the ability to question an income information and beliefs, which can be developed along with high education. But other than that, higher education gives people their own vision of life and makes them more thoughtful. However, there are still many people who have not graduated from university and will not do it in the future.
To sum it up, I would like to say that whoever has control over TV and newspapers, has control over minds of different people. Nevertheless, there are still those people who question any information they receive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, i guess, it is true, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80215827338 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72957831819 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539568345324 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4748367253 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.3571428571 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175456690007 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553322911196 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435110461345 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115808978676 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358156412219 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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