Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to excludes males or females from certain professions because of their gender?
Men and women are different in many aspects: physical body, character, interest etc. These differences affect a lot on the professions that males and females choose to do. However, it is not right to exclude people from certain jobs on the basis of gender.
The first reason is modern society gives everyone opportunity to do what they want. In the past, in some countries, women did not receive a good education as men so they did not have the chance to do some professions that required high-level skills and knowledge such as engineer or doctor… But nowadays, educated chances are equal, it is not strange to see female mechanics, female doctors, or even female astronauts. In contrast, we also see excellent male chefs, male fashion stylists and other occupations which are usually thought good fit for women. Thus, it is unfair to reject people for some jobs just because of their sex.
In addition, all the world is making effort to fill the gender gap at work. If we keep thinking that some kinds of jobs are just for men or women, the glass ceiling of gender discrimination will never be disappeared. Instead of rejecting, we should provide good conditions to help everyone reach the equality. For examples, many countries allow girls to join military duty, many companies let women work from home during pregnancy, many organizations offer scholarship for girls to study Math, Physics…
In conclusion, the differences between men and women does not mean they cannot do some certain kinds of job. I believe that along with the development of society, the gender gap will be filled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95167286245 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65419178693 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.2233324416 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286800672402 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955814637084 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713360820725 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18506363871 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103086157197 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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