The world would be a much poorer place without color. To what extent would you agree or disagree?
There is a controversial issue about the role of color in society. Some artists state that the world would be a dreary place, if it were colorless. In this essay, I agree with their point of view.
Let us start with reasons why some artists argue that the world would be dull, if it had no colorful objects. The first reason is that human eyes mostly differentiate things by color. People would find it difficult to distinguish one thing from others, if they were colorless, since the eyes help to do it by means of pigments. Another reason is that all advantages of modern world would become useless. People are used to watching TV in color as well as use the Internet with amazing images, but all these benefits would lose their meaning, if they become only in black and white. As a result, it is impossible to imagine how impoverished the world would look without its colors, which enrich human life.
However, some minimalists say that the world would remain the same, if it lost its colorfulness. They justify their opinion with the following arguments. Firstly, many people with impaired vision still enjoy the world. For example, the blind are used to ignoring the absence of vision by compensating it with enhanced hearing ability, so other people also are capable to adjust to the colorless world. Secondly, people lived in the world close to colorless one. For instance, before colorful television became available, viewers still enjoyed TV programs in black and white, because the color just improves, but it cannot replace an interesting plot. Therefore, people can live in a colorless world, if they stop focusing only on pigments.
In conclusion, even though some followers of minimalism claim that world would not become poorer, once the diversity of color disappeared in it, I think that the world become both dull and tasteless for the above mentioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93396226415 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53626246069 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 11.0 2.10420841683 523% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8537684262 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2941176471 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76470588235 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27869992961 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911655893983 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661646111742 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186364097797 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520184587629 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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