Write about the following topic Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from yo

Essay topics:

Write about the following topic:
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.

Submitted by yeuser on Tue, 08/18/2020 - 08:15

In these times we as people are throwing away garbage more frequently and in more quantities than ever. There are quite a lot of different factors involved in it that lead us into such disaster impacting our environment. I believe some of the most important attributes of our lives, such as the new cosumerism trend and the massive utilization of cans and plastics for conservation of food are the habits that have contibuted hugely to creation of vast amounts of rubbish.

In the recent centuary, we have seen a new wave of consumerism engulfing our culture, pushing the nation towards bigger and more frequent purchaces. In a sense, even if a person does not need an item, he or she will start shopping habitually to spend some time as a hobby. this is by itself a definition of addiction of individuals and hints to a much biggre dilema of our society in general and unfortunately each and every item that is bought comes with a package, a wrapping which will be thrown away instantly. Furthermore, when facing big stacks of products and limited spaces inside houses, one needs to priorities the items to keep and get rid of what is not completely necessary. For instance, if you buy a ton of clothes and you have not a big spacious closet, then you would need to take care of your old shirts and suits, right? The simple answer to the issue is to throw what is not fashionable anymore out and stick with what is new and shiny.

taking a look over our grocery stores and convinience stores, and going to food ailes, one will encounter massive conservative products in moderate and small cans or bottles if they are drinks. Naturally, humans do need to use some sort of conservation technique to battle rotten foods and our spiecies would make use of aluminum, tin and metal alloys in combination of thin layers of plastic to commodate such longitivity of pre-cooked beans, soups, chickens, fish, meat and much much more. Eventually, these cans and packages of different products need to be thrown away when the delicious inside food is eaten, and these group of daily garbages, we make, is by itself one of most hidious faces of new area of rubbish making humans.

Overall, I believe our temporary lifestyle in the modern world has created such pile of rubbish near our cities. Unless we get rid of our heineous habits and change the normal lifestyle, we cannot tackle this problem at all.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS General Training

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...bitually to spend some time as a hobby. this is by itself a definition of addiction ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Taking
...d stick with what is new and shiny. taking a look over our grocery stores and conv...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: much
... beans, soups, chickens, fish, meat and much much more. Eventually, these cans and packa...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, then, for instance, in general, sort of, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71904761905 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61668724807 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57619047619 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9140286104 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.571428571 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138220488197 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461405298752 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320541405415 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839956824658 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01855263052 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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