Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this age of social media where everything gets viral instantly, it is very easy to become famous. On the contrary, at times, it becomes hassle for the people who are celebrities as whatever they do in their routine life, gets attention of millions. Some goes in the favor whereas some criticize it so badly that we have seen these celebrities coming on TV and apologize for their random acts. At times it seems that in order to beat each other in the war of rating, media channels use to prolong some irrelevant issues and create unnecessarily chaos. This creates a sense of invasion in their personal lives by media and even by their fans.
To Begin with afore mentioned topic, there are different views taken from the fans which are the main reason behind this fame. One group is in the favor of giving some space to these celebrities as they think that they have a life other than the one which is open for everyone to talk about or criticize. This group is usually least bothered with what their favorite personality is doing in his/her routine life and are only concerned with their appearance in the media for which they are famous for.
On the contrary, there is this other bunch of people who have a strong belief that “they are the reason behind success of these celebrities and they have all the right to know rather invade in his/her privacy. In their view, life of these people should be like an open book and all aspect of their life should be open for discussion publically. At the same time, these people might not let others, even their close friends to peek in their personal life.
There are examples where we can see people criticizing these celebrities for doing some fun activities in their personal life. An example of Malala Yousaf Zai is to be discussed here where she was playing with colors in her university with her colleagues and she got bashed not only for the game but on her dressing too. We have seen a lot of people becoming ambassadors of religion and criticizing her for her outfit.
To conclude this, I must say that a line must be drawn and media should focus on bigger issues then discussing the life of a celebrity and drag it for hours on their channels. We all have right to spend our life freely and without others bothering us and same should be the case with celebrities as they are as human as we are.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, whereas, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54460093897 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33784432786 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490610328638 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.4743060249 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298147249084 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112348090025 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697549528558 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184022765318 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649476460918 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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