Over the years a lot of people buy animals as pets for themselves. Different types of animals can be considered to be pets as long as it does not cause any harm to the household. In this essay I am going to make a comparison between dogs and parrots as pets for human beings.
On the one hand, dogs are fondly called "man's best friend" because of their very loyal nature, yet these creatures walk on four legs. Dogs can crossbreed because of the different breeds of dogs available today. German shepherds can be trained given that they are very intelligent animals, so the boarder security uses them to detect illicit drugs. However, dogs have a great sense of smell which helps them in retracing the previous trails made by urinating on various spots. Therefore, I have made some comparisons above, and dogs are such great pets.
On the other hand, parrots are a specie of birds that people buy when considering birds as pets. This colourful looking bird can repeat a word or sentence after it hears a person speak. This flying creature has a beak, colorful feathers and two legs. A cage is bought in most cases before the bird is purchased, so that it can have a home in the household. Since these birds eat lizards, reptiles will not come near homes that have parrots in it. Thus, everything listed above are things that concern parrots, so parrots are considered as pets.
To conclude, in this essay I have made comparisons between dogs and parrots as pets for human beings.
- you have arranged a visit to close friend in Canada but an important event at home now means you will have to change the dates of visit write a letter to your friend In letter explain the important event apologize for the situation suggest a new arrangeme 61
- Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession Is this a positive or negative development 78
- you have arranged a visit to close friend in Canada but an important event at home now means you will have to change the dates of visit write a letter to your friend In letter explain the important event apologize for the situation suggest a new arrangeme 73
- The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action 61
- More and more people give money as a gift rather than buy some items What is the reason for this Is it a negative or positive trend 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70342205323 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45089995925 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570342205323 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9127814888 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0748984136664 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286110329214 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436096637859 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660538224133 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568957778075 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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