The fundamental concept of any international organization is to assist especially third world war countries. This can be done either in the form of money or by providing suitable instructions and skills. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions in detail and provide evidence why financial support is superior.
Discussing the former view, money is considered as strongest backbone of any nations. Whether to build great infrastructure or to empower youth, financial security is needed. Multiple sectors could have been conveniently addressed such as education, health, military offences and so on. India who got its freedom not more than 75 years ago can be viewed as ideal example of this. With great economical help from international institutions such as IMF, it has discovered growth in numerous fields. Many times it has been observed that, due to some environmental crisis like Tsunami or earthquake, these nations are again pushed back to bottom line. At this time, to regain from these disasters money becomes deciding factor. Therefore, financial backing from these is utmost crucial.
Addressing the latter suggestion, there are many countries who are financially very sound but due to lack of appropriate information and talent, they are unable to grow. Channelizing their young generation as well as pertaining vivid schemes can be seen as an essential task. During the Covid period, many developing nations, for example, Indonesia, Shri Lanka were in urgent need of medical professionals and equipment so that they rely completely on World Health Organization. Hence, paving their pathway with advanced research and knowledge is essential.
To conclude, any developing country want to upgrade themselves in all possible ways. In my opinion, having proper amount of funding is most important for their growth than skills or advices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 684, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'disasters'' or 'disaster's'?
Suggestion: disasters'; disaster's
...ine. At this time, to regain from these disasters money becomes deciding factor. Therefor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, therefore, third, well, for example, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42560553633 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92973962004 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709342560554 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0261395222 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2352941176 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215700529969 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563945199065 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327942952264 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112921973094 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203372503156 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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