You have been offered a job, asking you to start next week. You want the job very much but, because of a previous commitment, you want to delay the start for another two weeks.
Write to the Manager, accepting the job, but explaining your situation and asking for the change to
your start date.
You should write at least 150 words.
Allow yourself 20 minutes for this task.
You do not need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam . . . ,
I am writing this letter to request you to postpone the joining date for the job that you offered to me. Firstly I am thankful to you for giving me opportunity to work in your company. I always wanted to have this job and I would love to accept your offer with heartfelt gratitude. As stated in the letter, you have intimated me to start the job next week. But I would plead you to delay my joining for another two weeks due to reasons mentioned further.
Let me explain my situation. I am currently working in a company and I was not sure whether I will get the appointment in your firm. So, I have not given any notice of leaving the job to my current employer. I need to inform them about two weeks prior according to the company policies. Resigning without earlier notice will make me liable for a penalty and I also do not want to behave against professional ethics. This will not go well my values.
Therefore, I deeply appeal you to delay my start date for two weeks. I shall be thankful for your deed. I hope you will consider my request and give me some more time.
Yours Faithfully
John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40096618357 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41391254848 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4334611169 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.7333333333 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379661385734 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125759770303 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106768531782 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25737608017 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14665006444 0.056905535591 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.0946893788 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.