Modern communications mean that it s no longer necessary to write letters To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience You should write at

Essay topics:

Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

In this era of technological advancement, letter writing is slowly fading away and people ascertain that communicating through letters is not required. In my opinion, I totally agree with this viewpoint as modern forms of communication are more convenient and efficient.

First of all, letter writing is a tedious task. When one puts pen to paper, he or she need to follow a series of procedures which is time consuming. To give an example, if a person wants to contact another, they have to travel to the post office, buy a stamp, paste it and make sure that the sender's details are written precisely. In addition to this, they must place the paper document in the correct coloured box. Despite this, sometimes the document does not reach the receiver. On the contrary, the modern devices are more easy as we just need to draft a mail and hit the send button, which saves a lot time. In short, communicating with paper is now become inefficient.

Second of all, letters are not pocket friendly. This means that for every paper to be posted, one has to make payment for multiple reasons such as travelling to the post office, an envelope, a stamp and also letter transportation money. On the other hand, an individual only has to invest in an electronic device once and communicate for free. The best examples are Facebook, Whatsapp, Google mails and Skype. Moreover, a person can contact another person any number of times without being charged because of internet facilities. All in all, an overseas letter can cost you loads whereas a Skype call will only cost you a minimum internet fee that is next to negligible.

To conclude, even though communicating with pen and paper is a long lost art, I believe that it is not essential anymore because of the modern developments of electronic devices that has made it easy for us to contact another. Also, we can still continue this art of writing through laptops and mobile phones.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...as we just need to draft a mail and hit the send button, which saves a lot time. In shor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, whereas, as to, in addition, in short, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80538922156 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68799087036 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6300784543 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4117647059 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194382034735 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058198468698 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400881612544 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121173113295 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388531069001 0.056905535591 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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