You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
You should write at least 254 words.
Today we are living in the business world and everyone is in race to achieve his/her respective position in the market. It is becoming a huge concern that new employees in various companies do not have enough developed their interpersonal skills. In this essay, I would shed light on the reasons behind this and would give some solutions.
To begin with, first and foremost cause of lacking such skills is not getting enough work experience in big organizations due to which they are not familiar with the importance of team work. Apart from this, in schools students get awarded based on their own work in lieu of team jobs which leads them to avoiding grouping. Moreover, nowadays people just want fame and high position in their office, therefore they love to do their job alone for showing their talent and try to unrevealed other's by not letting them participate in the projects. For instance, few members in my office could not work in teams as they turn group activities into a kind of race where they can become boss's favorite and get promotion as soon as possible, my manager is one of them.
Although, these skills are depends on person's thinking, but still there are many ways to build up cooperative abilities. Firstly, schooling plays a crucial role here, students should get knowledge about the significance of working together with others in their school period as this time youngsters can understand things easily. Furthermore, corporations should reward whole group instead of promoting one person after success in any project which will encourage people to do jobs in groups.
In a nutshell, it is true that new employees are does not fit in working as teams, however, this could be possible by teaching them the value of togetherness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, apart from, for instance, kind of, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91582491582 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61165756785 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.3058521243 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.727272727 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6363636364 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18238740972 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651580396887 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317817970798 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106091476069 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236977446645 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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