You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Each countries has your own rules and laws but sometimes it can be a problem when these countries allow children do what they want to do because they think that is right and do not understand the situation and sometimes can be disrespectful with others.
Some countries around the World treat children as an adult when they commit some kind of crime for example in USA when the children kill someone or just stolen store or people who are walking on the streets and the police arrested him and the children will be judged by the judge as an adult person. If the crime is really heavy the child can stay in the prison for rest of his life.
Otherwise, in my country the people do not think in the same way and they believe that when a children commits some crime they need to go to a some place try to recover himself and after try a new life even if he killed someone in the past. Perhaps, the children make mistakes because they are protected by the laws as he cannot be arrested until he achieve 18 years old and sometimes an adult use children to commit crime and try to be safe when he say that who killed the person was a children who was involved in the assault.
In my opinion, I believe that children should go to the prison and learn they mistakes like an adult but I also believe that sometimes the real mistake is not because of the children but was how their parents educated him and if they teach good manners for this children who commits this crimes.
In conclusion, It is important to everyone follow the rules and help each other to avoid this problems which many countries around the World are suffering. It will make everyone more comfortable and we could feel free to go where we go without fear.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
Each countries has your own rules and laws b...
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Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
Each countries has your own rules and laws but sometimes i...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey commit some kind of crime for example in USA when the children kill someone or...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...the same way and they believe that when a children commits some crime they need to go to a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'achieves'.
Suggestion: achieves
... laws as he cannot be arrested until he achieve 18 years old and sometimes an adult use...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...n he say that who killed the person was a children who was involved in the assault. I...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ildren who was involved in the assault. In my opinion, I believe that children s...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mistake'
Suggestion: mistake
... should go to the prison and learn they mistakes like an adult but I also believe that s...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 258, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... him and if they teach good manners for this children who commits this crimes. I...
^^^^
Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...d manners for this children who commits this crimes. In conclusion, It is import...
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Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... the rules and help each other to avoid this problems which many countries around th...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.403125 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24937274243 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48125 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.2329359574 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.125 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252783905104 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111782189966 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746022249432 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147929228025 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491447809155 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.