Fitness is the most arising concern, globally. Reported by several countries, overweight is quite common in many children which can be a severe threat to their physical health and well being. This essay will discuss the several reasons behind this problem and will demonstrate how it can be controlled.
There are many factors which leads to overweight; this includes improper food habits, lack of physical exercises, genes and diseases. These days, children are exposed to a large variety of junk food which is preferred over home-cooked meal. The fast-food business is expanding exponentially and an increase in their joints gives an easy access to unhealthy food. It is said that these food items have a chemical substance which creates an urge in people, especially children, to eat it regularly. Moreover, children prefer to indulge in indoor activities like playing video games, board games which tops it by developing laziness. Statistics says that 12% of children are inherited with genes that leads to obesity.
Like every problem has a solution, although it cannot be eradicated, but there are certain ways that would aid in normalization of over grown weight in children. To begin with, children should oftenly participate in outdoor activities which would refrain them from sitting at home. If there is a way to introduce a reward system where a child recevies unhealthy food as a reward, which would definitely help to control the unhealthy food intake. Other activities like cardiovascular exercises, yoga and dance are some more effective ways of controlling this.
Do you fulfil every demand of your child? Now is the time to put an end to this habit as children are not aware of good life choices. Overweight is a popular and trending concern that can be avoided by taking necessary actions. This essay discussed several factors that are the cause of this problem along with suitable suggestions that would help to prevent it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14150943396 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69729393376 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3981952561 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1764705882 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.47058823529 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192550246609 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610797886664 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639023606577 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126510982679 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491398784021 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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