Nowadays it seems that almost all websites show online advertisements from other companies for products or services.
Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
Technology and internet have become a vital part of our daily lives. These days, a new trend has been developed on the websites where they showcase online advertisements to promote goods and services of other companies. In my opinion, it should be fine to display advertisements of other companies as long as it doesn't have a negative impact on minors.
Irrespective of countries, there are no such restrictions on minors to prevent them from being exposed to the dark side of the internet. These advertisements could have an adverse impact on young people and children as they are not capable enough to make decisions. Sometimes, the products are falsely advertised and not all the harmful effects of it are displayed in the ads. As the children are mostly dependent on their parents, they would insist hard on buying the product. Parents, out of their will, would have to forcefully purchase the product.
On the other hand, looking from a different perspective, showcasing advertisement on websites would provide monetary benefits to their owners. It is essential for them to get funding because it would be required in developing and maintaining their websites. It has become quite a popular business where a lot of small to medium scale businesses opts for it. It is an enhanced and effective way of marketing which requires less money as compared to the traditional methods which includes advertisement on television and hoardings/ banners on the streets.
To conclude, it could be said that as long as the online advertisements doesn't have create a negative impact, it is a good thing to advertise products or services to make money. This would also aid in website's owners to create relationships with other firms for collaboration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09407665505 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9844054777 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.714065255 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263625322458 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815050034612 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710860151891 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164843734905 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794641547111 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.