Write about the following topic.
Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
In todays world Media places a very critical role portraying positive or negative image of any celebrity. In this essay, we will discuss on how famous people are unfairly treated by media and that how media tends to invade their personal life.
Firstly, In todays world where every information is readily available on the internet, live video's on Facebook or any other social media, Celebrities have to play very safe. Due to some personal arguments with media channels, the channel can tend to depict a negative image of the person which can adversely affect their popularity. I strongly agree that media do tend to treat very biased with many celebrity. Recently when a famous movie stars son was held captive by the authorities for some issue, media tend to make such fake news about him and his son and also tried to spoil their image in public.
Which brings us to the other point that should these stars be given privacy or media has a right to intervene their personal space. I believe that privacy is everyone's right and being a celebrity or a common man everyone should be given the privacy they want. However, the journalist do not understand their limits and often cross their lines and invade the personal space. This is one of the reason why the stars travel abroad to get away from media attention and enjoy their privacy. I have personally seen few of the big movie stars in my country roaming freely on the streets in other countries just like normal people.
In conclusion to the above, media do tend to play a biased role in portraying the image of celebrities and often tend to invade their private life, while the celebrities too deserve to get their private space they want.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun celebrity seems to be countable; consider using: 'many celebrities'.
Suggestion: many celebrities
...media do tend to treat very biased with many celebrity. Recently when a famous movie stars son...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to deserve'?
Suggestion: to deserve
...eir private life, while the celebrities too deserve to get their private space they want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74074074074 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33140610621 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1825840171 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21977719397 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861918842593 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606038177471 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141132591549 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325663015245 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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