You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words.
Have you ever gone through an entire month or even a week without listening to that favourite song of yours to uplift your spirits, or that tune that lets you relax and forget about your worries? The answer would most probably be no. Music has almost always been an integral parts of our lives and there isn’t a dearth for the types of music in the world today.
This leads us to think why we need music. We have almost always had taken its presence for granted. Reflecting on the need for music has led to several interesting revelations of how human beings function and perceive the world. The most interesting discovery was published in a journal article in the one of the most renowned of scientific publications called Nature. It was the result of a study conducted by the Berklee school of Music in California.
Sounds, especially when organized in different variations of tones within the spectrum of human hearing, with the addition of different textures of sound coming from different instruments or the human vocal chords, which we call music, has a profound impact of different parts of the brain. Each different type of arrangement of the parameters produces a different emotion by activating different parts of human brain and sometimes even by activating different parts of the body. This was proven evidently through magnetic resonance imaging and sensors plugged to subjects that were exposed to music of different types in our laboratories.
Conclusively, the article demonstrated how we need music as a key motivator in our lives and as a means of creative expression to activate our emotions which drive us into action. This is one of the main reasons why we have music. The national pride that anthems inculcate, the feeling of love that romantic songs evoke, the tears that tragic songs bring, or the goosebumps that eerie music produces are all evident on the effect of music on our moods and emotions. Emotions being the ingredient to propel humans into taking action, music is used as the most important tool to proliferate one’s feelings to others.
Music in the early times was almost always local and traditional. It has its roots in the community, large societies or sometimes even an entire country. This kind of music appeals to the audience which belong to group where music originated. And then, later came the international music that is listened to globally and subscribed by all humans irrespective of national boundaries or ethnicities. I believe, that both these types of music are equally essential without one being superior or inferior to the other.
While local music appeals to a community and promotes belongingness and identity to a person with their own kind, international music has the ability to surpass differences between these communities and bring about universally upheld values by humanity. This combination produces a critical balance between knowing where one comes from and embracing the other communities of the world.
While I enjoy every bit of music from my home town in India, I also love the music produced by popular bands such as the Beatles, Michael Jackson and ACDC. This gives me a perspective of other cultures around the world and way to relate to someone that lives several miles apart. This is evident from how I was able to connect with someone in the US while I was travelling, through our common taste in music and love of rock songs. This ability to connect can be seamlessly forged by developing a taste for international music. International music is one of the most common forms of art that two people from anywhere in the world can appreciate and bond over. While having this connect with people around the world, I also comeback to who I am as an individual by listening to music that I love from my hometown. It reinforces a sense of identity and reminds of my roots.
Hence, traditional music and international music are both equally important and ensure there is a balance of ones’ own identity at the same time facilitating the connect between two groups of people from different parts of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 25, column 433, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... taste in music and love of rock songs. This ability to connect can be seamlessly fo...
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Line 29, column 164, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... identity at the same time facilitating the connect between two groups of people from diffe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, then, while, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 112.0 41.998997996 267% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3446.0 1615.20841683 213% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 692.0 315.596192385 219% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97976878613 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.12892706869 4.20363070211 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72219778313 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 319.0 176.041082164 181% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46098265896 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1101.6 506.74238477 217% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4579563351 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.866666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274226911621 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821702570141 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514199738753 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139192805232 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183048962993 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 163.0 78.4519038076 208% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.