Young people are leaving countryside to live in cities and towns leaving old people in countryside
what are the problems
what are the solutions
migration is common today. youth groups are moving out from countryside to settle down in urban area leaving old people all alone in countryside. The main reason would be the lifestyle and more opportunity . The best thing could be done to save them by creating same atmosphere in back home
The lavish life of city attract young adults to cities. The big buildings , clubs and tourist supports are some major attraction for them. Comparing to the living some condition in countryside where they living far from major hubs. rather than living all alone in countryside home they prefer to move on to the big town where they can stay with new modern society. In addition to that another reason for the migrating would be opportunity for future . In urban areas they can get better job options . they can be hire by big companies as most of the multinational companies prefer to hire and stay in downtown rather than villages. Moreover to start-up new business the metropolis is the best options as it has more population rather than at back home . For example :- To start-up a resturant business urban areas would be best place as they have perfect population, perfect location in contrast to rural area where there are few people .
Its been hard to solve this difficult situation , but the best solution is to create same lifestyle and opportunity in countryside. The government needs to encourage multinational companies to invest some money in village area also to create some job opportunity there also . if there will be some better employment chances there . then the youth will not plan to moved out in cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90842490842 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61191699757 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534798534799 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6475380298 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12496300128 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366149561172 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637597152193 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834334689971 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524589853619 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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