It is true that peers exert more influence on the young people as they tend to spend more time with them. I think this inclination of people has both positive and negative impact on the individuals, however I believe it’s benefits are eclipsed by its drawbacks.
There are various advantages to people spending time with the people of their age. The main benefit is that it helps them to prosper in their career. I mean when people try to emulate their friends who are successful, it motivates them to do their best and help them to excel. For example, when students compete with their peers who are exceptional at academics, it helps them to improve their academic credentials. In the same way, they can learn few important life skills such as communication, interpersonal and leadership skills by encouraging each other or by sharing , exchanging their knowledge and views which helps them in dealing with difficult situations in their future. So, this way friends’ company can have a positive impact on the individuals.
However, there are downsides to this habit of people. The gravest problem is sometimes this habit can lead to unwanted desires. Due to the high earning capability some young people tend to spend more money on lavish commodities such as designer wears, state-of the art gadgets and so on. This can entice people with low-income to purchase these products which may eventually make them run into debt. Apparently, another drawback is that young people can resort to malpractices if they spend time with people who has bad habits. For instance, if any of their group member indulge into smoking, then young people might get enticed and try to follow them which could be detrimental to their health.
In conclusion, although this practice seems to have an adverse effect on individuals in certain situations, the encouragement and motivation stem from these habits appears to be more useful as it help individuals to grow and develop.
- Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by others in the same age This is called peer pressure Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages 67
- some people think tat arts is waste of time but other thinks that it should be included in the curriculum 73
- Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by others in the same age This is called peer pressure Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages 78
- Spoken communication is always powerful than written communication Do you agree 73
- It is suggested that all young people should take a period of unpaid work to help local community 73
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
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... habits appears to be more useful as it help individuals to grow and develop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, i mean, i think, in conclusion, such as, it is true, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02147239264 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70116630618 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573619631902 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8476753057 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.133333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216062661259 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766601092491 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462815179206 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12033366385 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062197190517 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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